Comments on: Paul The Critic Pt.4 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/ Just a daily (or thereabouts) dose of my thoughts, pictures, or things I like Fri, 09 Jan 2009 07:52:06 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Tobias Humphrey http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-307 Tobias Humphrey Tue, 08 Apr 2008 06:38:06 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-307 Here, here. Here, here.

]]> By: Rachel http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-309 Rachel Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:00:32 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-309 Just sayin'. Just sayin’.

]]> By: Rachel http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-308 Rachel Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:00:11 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-308 Someone needs to UPDATE!!! :) Someone needs to UPDATE!!! :)

]]> By: Rebekah http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-315 Rebekah Fri, 28 Mar 2008 19:36:16 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-315 Wow Sam you've never been so popular. : ) Wow Sam you’ve never been so popular. : )

]]> By: Krista Humphrey http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-314 Krista Humphrey Thu, 27 Mar 2008 17:04:04 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-314 That was really good! Now it's finally getting REALLY interesting =o) That was really good! Now it’s finally getting REALLY interesting =o)

]]> By: Kluane http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-313 Kluane Thu, 27 Mar 2008 15:50:30 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-313 Wow Sam! That was awesome...It'll be kind of hard but I don't know why everybody says "Poor Kluane" I have the best part!!!!!! Kluane P.S. Aimee!!!! You spelled my name wrong!!!!! Wow Sam! That was awesome…It’ll be kind of hard but I don’t know why everybody says “Poor Kluane” I have the best part!!!!!!
Kluane
P.S. Aimee!!!! You spelled my name wrong!!!!!

]]> By: Aimee http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-312 Aimee Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:48:54 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-312 Whoa! That was fast. I thought you were going to think about it for a while=D I love the way you ended it!! And you made his sister just like I thought she should be. Poor Klaune=D Aimee Whoa! That was fast. I thought you were going to think about it for a while=D I love the way you ended it!! And you made his sister just like I thought she should be. Poor Klaune=D
Aimee

]]> By: TwiceBorn http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-311 TwiceBorn Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:45:33 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-311 Soo sorry for double posting, i hate it when people do it on mine. I was just gonna say i was thinking: "what kind of sister would paul have? She's probably really nice in contrast to paul, and she's probably named sarah, and she probably lectures him for being critical." I'm not jokeing. That's freaky. Oh, and i think the girls have been writing good, but i think it's easier for the us to portray paul's cheracture. Like when he mumbled at the cab driver and shoved his money at him, that's totally paul. One contradiction, He screamed and shouted when Rachel said he rarely raises his voice. I guess this was an extreme case so he's allowed to act out of cheracter. Ooh, i wish i could right the next one. Tobi Soo sorry for double posting, i hate it when people do it on mine.

I was just gonna say i was thinking: “what kind of sister would paul have? She’s probably really nice in contrast to paul, and she’s probably named sarah, and she probably lectures him for being critical.”
I’m not jokeing. That’s freaky.

Oh, and i think the girls have been writing good, but i think it’s easier for the us to portray paul’s cheracture. Like when he mumbled at the cab driver and shoved his money at him, that’s totally paul.

One contradiction, He screamed and shouted when Rachel said he rarely raises his voice. I guess this was an extreme case so he’s allowed to act out of cheracter.
Ooh, i wish i could right the next one.

Tobi

]]> By: TwiceBorn http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-310 TwiceBorn Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:35:37 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-310 I feel sorry for kluane, she's ether gonna have to tie up some loose ends, or just leave us all puzzled. Man, every time i finish reading one i'm just like....I wish i could write the next part. Argh! I feel sorry for kluane, she’s ether gonna have to tie up some loose ends, or just leave us all puzzled. Man, every time i finish reading one i’m just like….I wish i could write the next part. Argh!

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