Comments on: Paul The Critic Pt.4 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/ Just a daily (or thereabouts) dose of my thoughts, pictures, or things I like Fri, 25 Jul 2008 03:35:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU By: Tobias Humphrey http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-121 Tobias Humphrey Tue, 08 Apr 2008 06:38:06 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-121 Here, here. Here, here.

]]> By: Rachel http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-120 Rachel Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:00:32 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-120 Just sayin'. Just sayin’.

]]> By: Rachel http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-119 Rachel Tue, 08 Apr 2008 03:00:11 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-119 Someone needs to UPDATE!!! :) Someone needs to UPDATE!!! :)

]]> By: Rebekah http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-112 Rebekah Fri, 28 Mar 2008 19:36:16 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-112 Wow Sam you've never been so popular. : ) Wow Sam you’ve never been so popular. : )

]]> By: Krista Humphrey http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-111 Krista Humphrey Thu, 27 Mar 2008 17:04:04 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-111 That was really good! Now it's finally getting REALLY interesting =o) That was really good! Now it’s finally getting REALLY interesting =o)

]]> By: Kluane http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-110 Kluane Thu, 27 Mar 2008 15:50:30 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-110 Wow Sam! That was awesome...It'll be kind of hard but I don't know why everybody says "Poor Kluane" I have the best part!!!!!! Kluane P.S. Aimee!!!! You spelled my name wrong!!!!! Wow Sam! That was awesome…It’ll be kind of hard but I don’t know why everybody says “Poor Kluane” I have the best part!!!!!!
Kluane
P.S. Aimee!!!! You spelled my name wrong!!!!!

]]> By: Aimee http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-105 Aimee Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:48:54 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-105 Whoa! That was fast. I thought you were going to think about it for a while=D I love the way you ended it!! And you made his sister just like I thought she should be. Poor Klaune=D Aimee Whoa! That was fast. I thought you were going to think about it for a while=D I love the way you ended it!! And you made his sister just like I thought she should be. Poor Klaune=D
Aimee

]]> By: TwiceBorn http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-104 TwiceBorn Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:45:33 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-104 Soo sorry for double posting, i hate it when people do it on mine. I was just gonna say i was thinking: "what kind of sister would paul have? She's probably really nice in contrast to paul, and she's probably named sarah, and she probably lectures him for being critical." I'm not jokeing. That's freaky. Oh, and i think the girls have been writing good, but i think it's easier for the us to portray paul's cheracture. Like when he mumbled at the cab driver and shoved his money at him, that's totally paul. One contradiction, He screamed and shouted when Rachel said he rarely raises his voice. I guess this was an extreme case so he's allowed to act out of cheracter. Ooh, i wish i could right the next one. Tobi Soo sorry for double posting, i hate it when people do it on mine.

I was just gonna say i was thinking: “what kind of sister would paul have? She’s probably really nice in contrast to paul, and she’s probably named sarah, and she probably lectures him for being critical.”
I’m not jokeing. That’s freaky.

Oh, and i think the girls have been writing good, but i think it’s easier for the us to portray paul’s cheracture. Like when he mumbled at the cab driver and shoved his money at him, that’s totally paul.

One contradiction, He screamed and shouted when Rachel said he rarely raises his voice. I guess this was an extreme case so he’s allowed to act out of cheracter.
Ooh, i wish i could right the next one.

Tobi

]]> By: TwiceBorn http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/2008/03/27/paul-the-critic-pt4/#comment-103 TwiceBorn Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:35:37 +0000 http://cupfullofjoe.wordpress.com/?p=92#comment-103 I feel sorry for kluane, she's ether gonna have to tie up some loose ends, or just leave us all puzzled. Man, every time i finish reading one i'm just like....I wish i could write the next part. Argh! I feel sorry for kluane, she’s ether gonna have to tie up some loose ends, or just leave us all puzzled. Man, every time i finish reading one i’m just like….I wish i could write the next part. Argh!

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